local leader election in argumentative paragraph

       local leader election or pilkada is a hot problem
that has happened in aceh right now.almost of people
who have an eighteen years old,they should chose
the leader to the future.everybody must chose only
the leader who the think the best and can operate
this country(aceh) to five years later.in Fact sometime
there are a group of people give us money and they command
us to chose the leader who their want.I think that is not good
for us because everybody have their mind to chose someone
who they like.we can see in experience before we also saw
the promise doesn't be real in our life